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[Emo Boy Ep.1]

Not great, not bad, needs some work

The lipsynching wasn't terrible, but it could use some work. The best advice is to up the frame rate and go frame by frame.

Nice little script there in the beginning making people think you're insulting them, though. That's pretty funny!

cHunter responds:

Yeah, that's what I was doing for the most part for the lips, but the audio went out of sync for some reason. It synced up on my computer, but when I uploaded it, it decided to wack out. :(

[I kicked a squirrel]

Entertaining little parody

I have to say, while the the person who sang the song is terrible, you're really on to something there with the lyrics. If you can find someone with a really good voice to sing your lyrics, you'd get a higher score.

The animation was just okay, but if it had better singing, it would work rather well

[Chrono Trigger Unglued 17]

Excellent as always. Truly epic

I have to say, this was even funnier than the last episode. Everything flowed and fit in very well. The secret scene was awesome, too.

I wish it was a little longer, but that's a personal preference.

I certainly hope the next episodes comes out soon!

Clovis15 responds:

If my work permits, Episode 18 will be out before the end of this year. Don't ever expect to see episodes be much longer than this ever again. With all the little touches and effort I put into every episode of CTU, it is just murder on myself to make something like Episode 16.

[Phoenix Habanera]

Decent, not great. Okay, not perfect.

Well, it's a funny song and that's what most people are going to be voting on, rather than the actual quality of the animation.

Your lip synching was good, but the entire animation as a whole felt lacking. You need more dynamic shots of the characters while they are performing.

Work on the placement of your sprite as well, because there were several times when they'd move around when transitioning between poses, and they weren't always in the right spot for the stills (Phoenix too far from the left side and it left an obvious gap, for instance, when looking forward with his right and on his hip).

It was just okay for me.

perpetual-mind responds:

thanx.
i know theres quite alot wrong with it but its all in the process of learning.
i found it quite awequard to get the characters to lip sync correctly and move how i wanted to since i was limited by the sprites i had, but i made do with what i got.
every time i watch it back i realise new things that arent right, so if i ever make another sprite movie i should be able to avoid alot of these mistakes XD

[MK: Reptile vs. Ermac]

Needs work, sound, a lot of love

You need to fix your sprites: they bounce all over the place. Also, work on your animation. The character don't move fluidly at all. It's very obvious where the tweening is.

Fix the size of your background to match the size of your sprites, or vice versa. Two small sprites on a massive background is no fun for anyone.

Where's the sound? It's very boring to watch two poorly animated sprites do battle with no sound.

[I-ROCK MAN]

Hilarious parody of the prehistoric kind

Wow...the animation, once again, is really fantastic. The parody is spot on and the characters are as entertaining as always. The sound wasn't as optimized as it probably could have been, though.

megaener responds:

thanks (I am not good with sound making XD)